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Echozone's avatar

I really enjoyed this. It’s got Sci Fi adventure but also a cozy vibe. Clever that Earth is a backwater.

Deleyna Marr's avatar

Thanks! I love this series. And I mean... look where we are in the galaxy! (grin) But those humans... they're scrappy.

Laurie Schnebly's avatar

Aw, fun! Good bit of relaxation after a busy Thanksgiving. :)

Jaime Buckley 💎's avatar

Loving this.

Dang it, I want a BOOK.

THIS IS JUST TEASING... and it's MEAN.

Deleyna Marr's avatar

You'll get it. I just need to get some time to enjoy writing. But... be forewarned, that's not from book 1.

Jaime Buckley 💎's avatar

Thats....mean.

Nan G's avatar

Fun story, Delyna. It made me think of the first Thanksgiving when the two clicked sticks! :)

Deleyna Marr's avatar

Love it! Hadn't thought of that one!

Wezley Of Mearth's avatar

Wowwww! This is so cool!! 😎 🤩🥳👏👏👏 I am so glad you’re posting these bite sized stories! Love it! Impressive visualizations. Really great creative choices. ♥️

Hy Jessop's avatar

A very intriguing beginning. I love it.